Stephanie's Hero Path Essay

Stephanie Gentile- 2nd Hour

              Many people grow up and witness societal norms and attitudes as normal. When it comes to causing change, some people resist because of the risks and dangers that it could entail. However, a family friend of mine, Dr. William Anderson decided that it was worth stepping out of his comfort zone and faced the ultimate challenge in the 1960’s: overcoming racist attitudes and the segregation barrier.

When Dr. Anderson grew up, he knew he wanted to save lives as a doctor. However, his ambition was brushed off because it was unrealistic for a black male to attain such a career during the early parts of the century when Jim Crow laws stifled the ambitions of high-achieving African Americans. After being discharged from the Navy where he served in the first integrated company in the Navy’s history, Dr. Anderson met Dr. Martin Luther King, Jr in Atlanta, who became a friend and an inspiration.  Dr. Anderson’s dream of becoming a doctor encountered roadblocks when he found it was difficult to find a medical school in Michigan that would accept him because of his race. A doctor who was a friend of his helped Dr. Anderson attend a medical school in Des Moines, Iowa where he earned his medical degree.

Rather than pursuing a more lucrative career in the North, Dr. Anderson and his family relocated to Albany, Georgia, where there was an acute need for doctors in the local African American community.  It was in Albany, Georgia that Dr. Anderson faced one more trial. Doctors prevented him from treating his own patients because of the color of his skin. This ignited a response in him to end the unfair restrictions he faced as a doctor just trying to save lives. White people refused to let black people have well-paying careers, causing Dr. Anderson to protest and fight in a world of unfamiliarity and possible dangers. Dr. Anderson took a stand and participated in hundreds of marches.  At one time, he was accused of participating in an unlawful march, which resulted in jailtime for a year. Despite being arrested, his motivation for eliminating segregation did not stop. With the support of his friend, Dr. Martin Luther King Jr, Dr. Anderson formed what became known as the Albany Movement, a coalition of local black leaders that focused on desegregation and voting rights.

Naturally, the changes that happened in the Civil Rights Movement led to a transformation not just for Dr. Anderson but for the entire African American race. Racial discrimination still exists towards black people as seen with current political issues. However, heroism is based on sacrifice and duty. By embarking on the hero path, Dr. Anderson accomplished his goal of ending segregation through determination, perseverance, and motivation to end conflict regardless of the risks.

 

 

 

Advanced Composition: Taxi Cab Prompt

There's an urban legend that's been circulating for years about a taxi cab that doesn't take you where you want to go, but where you need to go. One night, you step into this cab. 

A Sunken Realization

It was a regular Sunday morning in Sienna Kai’s household. It was quiet and relaxing until the moment she opened her eyes.  All hell broke loose once she realized that her research paper on the Titanic that she had not started was due the next day. She unplugged her phone from its charging station and raced to her closet to get dressed. She threw on a Northwestern sweatshirt, jean shorts, and a pair of Chuck Taylors immediately after ordering an Uber. It was time to go to the library and write an extensive research paper in a short period of time. When the Uber arrived, she hopped in, and the driver gave her a newspaper entitled “Unsinkable Titanic!” There was another newspaper in the backseat with an article headlining the “Dreadful Calamity Occurring in April of 1912.” Both were original copies according to the Uber driver. Sienna was confused how her Uber driver knew she was writing a research paper about the Titanic, but she was grateful for sources she could use in her bibliography.

After some time passed, Sienna looked up at her surroundings and noticed an unfamiliar neighborhood. Very alert, she commented, “Where are we going?” The driver responded, “Where you need to go to receive an A. We’re going to the house of someone who can guarantee that for you!” Suddenly, the car made a stop in front of an old, dilapidated Queen Anne-style house. The driver pressed a button on his steering wheel, and the surroundings changed. The Uber car quickly turned into a Ford Model T, and the old house became a beautiful, seemingly renovated residence with purple lilacs embedding the porch. Sienna saw the clock in the Uber turn back because it was now 11:52 in the morning, and the year was now 1931. An older lady was standing in the doorway of the house waiting for Sienna to enter. The Uber driver took Sienna to the best of research sources: a Titanic survivor named Margaret Brown! Also known as “Molly,” the woman in the doorway was best remembered for her role as a heroine when she assisted people in evacuating the sinking boat and in encouraging Titanic crew members to go back and look for any survivors. She was even referred to as the “Unsinkable Molly Brown” in a later documentary about the Titanic’s aftermath.

Molly Brown was the perfect source for Sienna to use for her research paper! She was a first-hand account of the sinking ship, a living survivor, and she had original artifacts that could embellish Sienna’s research report. Not only did she educate Sienna on the ship’s history, the ship’s sinking, and the ship’s aftermath, Molly Brown also taught Sienna valuable life lessons. Sienna learned the importance of never giving up and being persistent. Who knew that an Uber driver was the key component to getting the information that Sienna absolutely needed to write a thorough analysis of a sinking ship? Needless to say, she received an “A” on her Titanic research paper once she returned to the year of 2019 to turn it in.

-Stephanie Sandra

AP Literature and Composition I: Preferred Passage from The Scarlet Letter

“Her sex, her youth, and the whole richness of her beauty, came back from what men call the irrevocable past, and clustered themselves, with her maiden hope, and a happiness before unknown, within the magic circle of this hour.” (139)

In Nathaniel Hawthorne’s The Scarlet Letter, he uses this passage to explore the character development of Hester Prynne through the way that the “A” consumes her. This passage is the moment when she can shine through the obstacles and hindrances that were in the way of her finding herself. The “A” had become part of her identity. It had branded her as a “adulteress.” She was labeled as a sinner. The word “irrevocable” demonstrates the judgement that people used when looking at her past. It defined her reputation in a negative fashion, causing people to look down on her in shame. This judgement and harsh nature of the Puritans was best illustrated through her wearing of the scarlet “A.” Yet, when she was in the forest at this moment in time, the “A” did not define her. It no longer consumed her identity, behavior, or appearance. The wilderness allowed for her to be free and feel liberated. She was able to regain her humanity and beauty from being in nature. The forest did not brand her reputation with a sin that she made in her past. The forest allowed for her to grow and to nourish as a woman. She was also with Dimmesdale, the man whom she loved, allowing for her best self to come out of the shadows.  Her youth and beauty returned to her because her love for him was the only thing on her mind. Hawthorne was accentuating the deep feelings that Hester had for Dimmesdale because of the way that love brightened her individuality. She was confident and prideful. Her beauty was highlighted in the forest because the freedom she could have in this safe space made her a confident, courageous woman. The forest could not limit her actions or her words because she was in a place where she could freely express herself and feel liberated. There were no boundaries in the forest, creating a sense of peace for Hester. This allowed for Hester to be glorified as a gorgeous individual who could get back in touch with her inner beauty and identity.

This passage resonated with me because I was able to truly observe Hester as a character. I did not have to read into the judgement and cruel intentions of the Puritan society. I was able to notice Hester as just a character. I could see her character as a person and not as someone who made a mistake in her past. As someone who was bullied a lot in middle school and my freshman year of high school, I found this passage relatable. Even though the Puritans never mocked her, they looked down upon her with harsh judgement. I had encountered a similar treatment from my peers when I was younger. This passage highlighted how Hester was able to achieve happiness again. Hester was able to become beautiful and confident with herself. When I moved here, I was able to meet people that understood me and liked me for me. They did not judge me or have a condescending tone towards me. I was able to find myself and grow as a person. My friends liked me for who I was, making me find my inner youth and identity. The associations with this passage are positive, illustrating how someone with a labeled reputation can still have a positive and happy life. This passage helped illuminate my final thoughts on the novel. I found that Hester’s character development was an interesting concept to see throughout the novel because Hester was able to display her true courage and strength.

-Stephanie Sandra

Advanced Composition: Stance on Trigger Warnings Essay

An Act of Humanity

Empathy and respect are two emotions that serve as the foundation for being “human.” It is crucial to respect the opinions of others, especially in circumstances where they feel threatened or vulnerable. To understand what others are feeling through relating to something that they have experienced is a key tactic to becoming successful in life. Jon Overton claims, “The motivations behind trigger warnings are undoubtedly admirable. They reflect the pinnacle of empathy and compassion,” further demonstrating how these two qualities are essential when considering the safety of students (519). Trigger warnings are important to have in a college or university setting because they highlight the emphatic and accommodating nature of the school, allowing for a safer learning environment and education.

Trigger warnings allow individuals to mentally prepare for any sort of content that could trigger a traumatic instance in someone’s head. As a human, everyone has encountered some sort of nasty experience. Trigger warnings allow for a forewarning of any material that could be covered in a class, resulting in students obtaining an awareness of what content is coming up in the curriculum. To prevent any mental breakdown or panic attack, it is best to warn individuals of any traumatic-related content that could be covered. It is benefitting both the class and the individual by doing so. With a warning, an individual is not surprised or under pressure when the content is put into a classroom setting. The individual has time to comprehend what is coming their way. Some universities also provide the option of copping out of that section of class if the student has a reason. Students should feel safe and comfortable in a classroom setting, a feeling which relates to an aspect of the Humanistic Theory. School should never be a place where people identify as someone in a fearful zone. They should feel as though they have a place of safety that is supportive of their past and still allows for them to learn intensely. Accommodating to people’s needs is one aspect of a college-life that students look for when applying to college. This understanding of feelings accompanied by a respect for the individual allows for a nurturing learning environment- boasting a great amount of success. If an individual feels vulnerable to threatened, the individual’s learning environment and the learning environment of others is tainted. A student should never have to experience what it feels to be “trapped” at school. Wendy Kaminer asserts, “A student who feels threatened by a word, a song or an argument is threatened and deserves protection” (Kaminer 524). A safe environment should be an attainable goal for all. It should be something that colleges strive for to ensure for all their students. Safety should be a type of freedom. Everyone is vulnerable at some point in their lives. Therefore, it is critical that they have a place they can go and feel welcome when they feel unsafe.

One may say that trigger warnings limit the amount of confrontational material that could be covered in classes, and school should be a place to challenge yourself. This may seem true; however, trigger warnings serve as a “heads-up” type of warning. These warnings do not prevent one from learning a concept or going in depth into a subject. It simply forewarns students of the content that they will be looking at in the future with the hopes of them being able to mentally prepare for it. Brianne Richson suggests that the forewarning serves as an indication “when emotionally or physically stressful material would be presented in the class” (514). This warning serves as an act of respect and compassion towards the feelings and past experiences of others. It does not jeopardize the learning environment in classes in any way. Trigger warnings simply allow for an awareness about the future curriculum.

In conclusion, it is important to be respectful and compassionate towards the feelings of others because of the past experiences they could have undergone. Schools are meant to be supportive. So, it is best for everyone to implement trigger warnings into a school’s curriculum. They forewarn individuals of any traumatic content that could be covered. It also allows for students to mentally prepare for how they will react, so they will not be humiliated if the content surprises them, and they react horrifyingly. Trigger warnings do not jeopardize learning or take away from the education of others. They simply allow for an awareness of what content will be covered in the class prior to the classes that start to look at it. Humans have evolved to a state-of-being that is very understanding of others. Therefore, humans should continue acting in a respectful and sympathetic manner. Safety should be a right for all. This ideal of safety can be obtained through an act of accommodating empathy, resulting in the most successful learning environment.  

-Stephanie Sandra

Advanced Composition: Stephanie's Interpretation on a Lost Letter Creative writing prompt

A New Love

To Whom It May Concern:                                                   

I must inform the wedding guests of this “minor” change in plans. Due to weather constrictions and a postal embargo in the state of Maine, this crucial note was delayed. Therefore, I, a close friend of the groom-to-be and the Best Man, felt the need to send this one long letter to explain the circumstances. I must add that this letter is essential in understanding who is really at the altar.

I will now begin this long-lasting tale to clarify any questions that may have presented themselves at this point already.

It is with utter sadness that I inform you that the wedding between Bartholomew Jacobson and Clarisse Wilson will not be occurring on May 9, 1903. After meeting in June of 1900, the two love-birds saw their destiny written in the stars. Nobody would have ever guessed that their ending would never reach the finish line. Before I spill the piping hot Earl-Grey tea, I must tell you about their epic love story that sadly ended due to unfortunate consequences. Let me also incorporate a spoiler! Mr. Jacobson does have a joyous ending. Before we get there, let us travel back in time to the day that Mr. Jacobson and Ms. Wilson met. In June of 1901, Margaret Grace McCall, a distant cousin to Mr. Jacobson, introduced the two soulmates at a friend’s twenty-second birthday extravaganza. Within minutes of conversing, Ms. Wilson and Mr. Jacobson knew that a future between the two was present. Flirtatious teasing and hair twirling were definitely on the radar of Ms. Wilson to captivate Mr. Jacobson’s attention. It was deemed successful because Mr. Jacobson was immediately attracted to Ms. Wilson’s strawberry-blonde curls, hazelnut cream-colored eyes, and floral-printed tunic all the meanwhile. They were inseparable after their introduction. When Mr. Jacobson proposed the idea of marriage on a chilly evening on Brookhaven Beach, Ms. Wilson did not even hesitate before responding “yes.” The torrential downpour that accrued only made the evening more memorable and romantic as they celebrated their engagement. However, this heavy rain was later understood to be the contraction of Ms. Wilson’s illness. She contracted hypothermia and pneumonia on this cold and wet night. This unfortunate contraction resulted in Ms. Wilson dying within a week and a half. To make matters worse, it was right after they decided on a wedding date! The sudden passing devastated Mr. Jacobson, but he had time to mourn his paramour. In a time of grief and devastation, Mr. Jacobson was able to find a sliver of hope and happiness. He has decided to marry Harriet Garland on the date of May 9, 1903.  Ms. Garland was best friends with Ms. Wilson, allowing for Clarisse’s spirit to remain intact between the new and happy couple. Ms. Garland comforted Mr. Jacobson after the tragic incident involving the death of Clarisse Wilson. The feeling of despair consumed the two individuals, leading to them falling for each other. Ms. Garland had certain qualities of Clarisse that reminded Mr. Jacobson. Her butterscotch-colored hair and ocean-blue eyes differed, but the exhilarated look on the face of Ms. Garland was the exact same. Ms. Garland and Mr. Jacobson opened themselves up with each other as they grieved an important member of their life.

When arriving at the wedding, be aware that the bride-to-be is Ms. Harriet Garland and NOT Ms. Clarisse Wilson. If you have a moment, we wish that you light a candle in honor of Ms. Wilson after the wedding services to remember her kind, loving spirit. We hope she rests in peace.

Cheers to the new happy couple! I hope that Ms. Garland and Mr. Jacobson have a prosperous future together, and I hope that you wish the same. Death does not always mean devastation. The passing of Clarisse Wilson left Mr. Jacobson completely heartbroken. However, his vulnerability allowed him to find comfort in somebody close to her to keep her spirit as best alive as possible when he fell in love with Ms. Harriet Garland.

I hope you can attend the wedding!

Sincerely,

Adam Matthys, Jr.

-Stephanie Sandra

AP Government and Politics: How Gerrymandering Is A Threat to Democracy

The United States holds a census every 10 years to reapportion the 435 seats in the House of Representatives.  Due to the growing population, some states benefit over others when the population shifts and changes.  The dominant political party of each state chooses where the district lines will be within each state for every election, potentially influencing the election’s outcome.  The ability to determine the district lines to benefit one party over another is referred to as “gerrymandering.”   For example, the Republican party could redraw the districts to deny as many Democratic voters as possible to maintain a conservative seat in the House.  Gerrymandering is a political tactic used in America that reduces competition between candidates within districts, thereby thwarting democracy and increasing polarization.

Gerrymandering has become a pandemic that is spreading across the nation ever since it was first used in 1812 under the administration of Massachusetts governor Eldridge Gerry.  He signed a redistricting bill into law that benefitted his own party.[i]  A drawing was later released showing the district boundary outline in the Boston Gazette.  It was shaped like a salamander, exploiting the manipulation that took place within Massachusetts’s government system.  [ii] This is how the term “gerrymandering” originated, as a merger of Eldridge Gerry’s name and the salamander shape of the district outline.  Following this incident in 1812, Congress enacted the Apportion Act of 1842.  This act required congressional districts to be designed in an adjacent and compact fashion.  It also established rules about creating a district. There would be a ratio between one congressman per 70, 680 residents.   Therefore, this act shrunk the size of the House of Representatives. [iii]Although now amended and redesigned, the bill was significant to the history of gerrymandering because of how it influenced the way states divided territory into congressional districts based on a demographic population.  The United States Constitution gives states the power and authority to redraw district lines in order to maintain equality. Since very few states follow contiguity guidelines regarding redistricting, many of them end up with irregularly shaped districts that may look like Illinois’s “earmuff” congressional district, Maryland’s “praying mantis” congressional district, or Pennsylvania’s “Donald Duck and Goofy” congressional district. [iv] Gerrymandering has been a political strategy used on a regular basis to disadvantage minority political parties.

Gerrymandering uses two methods to draw oddly and irregularly shaped districts every 10 years when districts are redrawn to reflect demographic changes.  The tactics are “cracking” and “packing”, causing Congressional districts to be distorted in a way that benefits one party over another.  “Cracking” severs a group of people into multiple districts to ensure that they do not have a sway with a candidate from a specific party.  It limits the amount of power that their votes could have in an election.[v]  In the past, cracking was used to prevent African Americans from voting for African-American politicians.[vi]  Measures have been taken such as the Voting Rights Act to ensure that racially-minded cracking does not occur.  However, the tactic of “cracking” is still prevalent regardless of whether it is used in a non-racial manner.  “Cracking” plays a role in breaking up communities for partisan gain.[vii]  It also serves a role in disenfranchising voters by causing their votes to be inconsequential, leading people to doubt American’s democratic political system.[viii]  Another method of gerrymandering is “packing,” which is used to place all like-minded individuals into the same district to benefit a political party.  It allows one party to succeed in one district, but it limits their impact in any other district.  “Packing” creates a super-district because all the like-minded voters are concentrated into one district, although they simultaneously lose their impact in the remainder of the districts. [ix]

The methods that manipulate the district lines cause polarization and undermine trust in the government system, resulting in a segregation of voters.  Individuals tend to cluster where like-minded individuals reside because of their similar political opinions.[x]  Professor Seth Masket from the University of Denver explained that gerrymandering does not accurately reflect a representative government.  He says that “Instead of voters picking politicians, the politicians pick the voters, ensuring their own reelection and making them impervious to retribution by voters for acting in too extreme a fashion.  Indeed, the more unbalanced the district becomes, the smarter it becomes for the incumbent to behave in a very partisan manner.” [xi] Gerrymandering has become a tactic that changes the outcome of elections because of its polarized nature.  It brings out the worst in partisan extremes, causing gridlock. When districts are gerrymandered, the incumbents pack the voters from the opposite party in districts that they will already win, wasting those votes.  Gerrymandering also manipulates congressional districts by creating a disproportionate Congress that divides communities by making it impossible to defeat incumbents of a certain party.  Studies highlight that incumbents spend less than their challengers in their re-election campaigns in gerrymandered districts due to their popularity over the challenger.  Their incumbent status allows for them to have a say in how the districts are drawn.  Gerrymandering seems to “create” the incumbents because their political party controls how the districts are designed.  The incumbents use redistricting to protect their own seats and prevent any chance that a challenger has at gaining a seat.  The incumbent’s chance of re-election increases tremendously because of their political power over how the districts are “cracked” or “packed.” [xii] John Delaney, a Democrat from Maryland, admitted to gerrymandering being a bad thing that has too much influence in the state of Maryland.  The sixth district that he formerly represented was manipulated in a way that made Republicans more competitive.[xiii]  Delaney has a valid point because Maryland has been accused of distorting their congressional districts in ways that judges have declared as illegal.  The fate of gerrymandering in Maryland’s sixth district will be voted on in the Supreme Court.[xiv]  Since Maryland is supposed to be one of the most gerrymandered states in the nation, the results of this case could impact the future of gerrymandering.  Delaney exclaimed, “We shouldn’t do this! You should pick your reps, the reps shouldn’t pick you,” further illuminating the national problem that gerrymandering poses.  This political tactic has become very common, affecting elections on local, regional, and national levels.  He believes that gerrymandering has “broken our democracy.”[xv] He also warned, “representative democracy is in crisis in the U.S… Our electoral process has created perverse incentives that have warped our democracy and empowered special interests and a vocal minority.”[xvi]  In the case of Maryland, gerrymandering has made it more difficult for politicians to lose their seats in the House, and it tends to perpetuate those seats staying within one party.

Gerrymandering has made it a challenge to remove incumbents from office because of the control that they have over their districts.  The majority party, especially incumbents, frequently use gerrymandering as a strategy to prevent the minority party from gaining a seat in office.  The political polarization from gerrymandering threatens the core principles of Congress, which is trying to pass legislation in an effective manner.  By favoring incumbents over long periods of time, gerrymandering creates a gridlock that prevents Congress from acting on significant issues like the economy or equality. [xvii]  That being said, gerrymandering is not the sole cause of today’s familiar political polarization.  There are other factors which have divided the country into two opposing sides, including primaries and caucuses.  This is because moderates generally do not attend either of these, so the people in attendance are quite extreme in their views. Therefore, the people who end up voting have extremist views, influencing the outcome of the election in a divisive manner.  But gerrymandering is the most egregious method that creates a polarized and separated system because it gives the legislators too much authority and control over their voters. [xviii]  Some Americans often feel that they are not being appropriately represented. This perception hurts the functioning of the government because it leads to a lack of trust.  The doubt and distrust of the government stimulated by political gerrymandering helps explain the declining rate of voter turnout in this country.   Gerrymandering plays a significant role in obliterating any competition between political parties and reduces the incentive to vote.[xix]  The low voter turnout could also mean that the people who do vote are people who tend to fall in the elite category with a higher income.  The elections that these voters participate in tilt the results in a way that favors businesses and organizations with money and power.  These companies target specific voters and back the incumbents through the disguise of advocacy groups that use unlimited funds.  Since the wealthy have a pull over who wins elections, this leads to an “elite polarization.”  The government experiences a gridlock that cannot execute legislation in the way that the people want.  This aspect of gerrymandering is evident when districts are made up of similar-minded individuals.  Those incumbents do not need to adjust their positions to win over the voters as they are already supported by the homogeneous majority. [xx]  If the incumbents are running for re-election and their district is being gerrymandered, the incumbent consider the issues that best represent the “majority” of the voters from that district. It is unlikely for incumbents to formulate a plan that reflects positions from the other party. Therefore, incumbents vote in a block formation that ensures that the opposing party will not win and that their political party will prevail. [xxi]  Studies completed by political science professors from Northwestern University and Princeton University highlighted that the citizens interested in money-related policies that accumulate authority and control is the type of legislation that prevails in Congress.  These money-focused interests are seen to be very divergent from the opinions of a middle-income or lower-income American citizen.  When these preferences differ, research by these professors indicate that the more elite and pro-business interests are those that win by an astounding number. [xxii] An example where gerrymandered districts ensured this cycle was Project Red Map, a conservative plan that redrew House districts nationwide for $30 million in state elections. This project benefitted pro-business constituents. Project Red Map also benefitted the Koch Brothers, showing why gerrymandered districts are manipulative to the outcome of elections because of its role in being advantageous for finance-driven corporations. [xxiii]

As gerrymandering has become more of an issue, the United States could attempt reforming the system to reduce the political polarization and fractionalization of democracy. Some states are in favor of using independent committees with no partisan bias to design the congressional districts.[xxiv] This approach eliminates “packing” or “cracking”, resulting in an equal district being created. This approach restricts minority groups from benefitting from a gerrymandered district and ensures a fairer election. At this stage, it is difficult to determine what reform method would work best. Grassroot groups have been advocating against gerrymandering, and they have started to form initiatives that could reduce the impact of gerrymandering within states. Michigan, for example, adopted legislation that established a redistricting commission formed of independents to draw the state’s districts. This initiative was passed in November of 2018. [xxv]  Utah will be implementing an initiative soon that will be led by a bipartisan group. This proposal is called “Utahns for Responsive Government.” It will create a group of people who are in charge of redistricting Utah. These people in charge of redistricting would be appointed by the governor and other Utah governmental leaders. The district commissioners would have to follow guidelines and criteria to formulate the districts to prevent homogeneous communities being formed or not formed. [xxvi] “Clean Missouri” is an initiative that Missouri is taking on that is similar to Utah’s but it contains less people and does not involve appointments of any kind. This initiative would provide a demographer from the state who is nonpartisan the task of drawing the boundaries within each district. [xxvii] Any action that states take is a step in the right direction because it means that the people living in those states refuse to let themselves be chosen by the candidates, pushing for it to be the other way around. It is important that states take initiative to reduce the influence of gerrymandering, because any initiative can dilute any impact from partisan manipulation to congressional districts.  

Gerrymandering is a divisive political tactic that undermines democracy and results in an unfair playing field.  Ever since it originated in 1812, it has proved to be toxic for America’s political environment.  It illuminates how the votes of American citizens are being corrupted. When the United States became a country, it was founded on a few basic principles.  One of the founding principles involved equal representation.  Due to gerrymandering, the United States struggles to uphold the standards of the Founding Fathers as the country has fallen into a habit of undemocratically electing governmental officials.  The political strategy of gerrymandering makes it more difficult for incumbents to lose their seats, and it results in that seat staying with one party.  It makes voters seem like they have no power, potentially leading to an even lower voter turnout.  Voters want to feel like they have a voice.  If they can pick who they feel will best represent them in office, then it is a fair voting system.  Gerrymandering, however, has led to a system where the politicians are picking the voters, causing it to be an extreme threat to America and its democracy.

 

 

 -Stephanie Sandra


[i] Barasch, Emily. “The Twisted History of Gerrymandering in American Politics.” The Atlantic, Atlantic Media Company, www.theatlantic.com/politics/archive/2012/09/the-twisted-history-of-gerrymandering-in-american-politics/262369/.

[ii] Dews, A Primer on Gerrymandering and Political Polarization, www.brookings.edu/blog/brookings-now/2017/07/06/a-primer-on-gerrymandering-and-political-polarization/

[iii] Barasch, www.theatlantic.com/politics/archive/2012/09/the-twisted-history-of-gerrymandering-in-american-politics/262369/.

[iv] Ran, Mark. “Gerrymandering, or How Drawing Irregular Lines Can Impact an Election.” www.pbs.org/newshour/extra/2017/06/gerrymandering-or-how-drawing-irregular-lines-can-impact-an-election/

 

[v] Whitaker, Princeton Gerrymandering Project Princeton University, The Trustees of Princeton University, www.gerrymander.princeton.edu/info/.

[vi] Ran, Mark, www.pbs.org/newshour/extra/2017/06/gerrymandering-or-how-drawing-irregular-lines-can-impact-an-election/

[vii] Olga Pierce, Jeff Larson, and Lois Beckett 2011 www.propublica.org/article/redistricting-a-devils-dictionary

[viii] Wofford, The Great Gerrymandering Debate, www.brownpoliticalreview.org/2014/07/the-great-gerrymandering-debate/

[ix] Whitaker, www.gerrymander.princeton.edu/info/.

[x] Dews, www.brookings.edu/blog/brookings-now/2017/07/06/a-primer-on-gerrymandering-and-political-polarization/

 

[xii] Wofford, www.brownpoliticalreview.org/2014/07/the-great-gerrymandering-debate/

 

[xiii] Harwood Harwood, Gerrymandering Helped John Delaney Win Office, But He Says It Has “Broken Our Democracy, “CNBC, www.cnbc.com/2018/12/26/gerrymandering-helped-john-delaney-win-office-he-says-it-has-broken-our-democracy.html

[xiv] Cox, Erin. “Maryland Faces Big Battle Over Partisan Gerrymandering.” The Washington Post, www.washingtonpost.com/local/md-politics/maryland-faces-big-battle-over-partisan-gerrymandering/2018/11/24/490249f4-ec68-11e8-96d4-0d23f2aaad09_story.html?utm_term=.02b54dd080bf.

[xv] Harwood, www.cnbc.com/2018/12/26/gerrymandering-helped-john-delaney-win-office-he-says-it-has-broken-our-democracy.html

 

 

[xvi] “Why Gerrymandering Matters.” Harvard University Press Blog, 2018, harvardpress.typepad.com/hup_publicity/2018/07/why-gerrymandering-matters-allan-lichtman.html.

[xvii] Wofford, www.brownpoliticalreview.org/2014/07/the-great-gerrymandering-debate/

[xviii] Dews, www.brookings.edu/blog/brookings-now/2017/07/06/a-primer-on-gerrymandering-and-political-polarization/

[xix] harvardpress.typepad.com/hup_publicity/2018/07/why-gerrymandering-matters-allan-lichtman.html.

[xx] Altman, Micah, and Michael McDonald. "Redestricting and Polarization." MIT Informatics. https://informatics.mit.edu/sites/default/files/dept/files/altmanandmcdonaldredistrictingpolarization_revised_1.pdf.

[xxi] Mui, Chunka. "To End Gridlock, Start by Ending Gerrymandering." Forbes. https://www.forbes.com/sites/chunkamui/2011/12/09/to-end-gridlock-end-gerrymandering/#2921bfa71792.

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[xxiii] Wofford, www.brownpoliticalreview.org/2014/07/the-great-gerrymandering-debate/

[xxiv] Mui, Chunka. https://www.forbes.com/sites/chunkamui/2011/12/09/to-end-gridlock-end-gerrymandering/#2921bfa71792

[xxv] Lo, Annie. "Citizen and Legislative Efforts to Reform Redistricting in 2018." https://www.brennancenter.org/analysis/current-citizen-efforts-reform-redistricting.

[xxvi] "Ending Gerrymandering." The Economist. https://www.economist.com/united-states/2018/10/06/ending-gerrymandering.

 

[xxvii] Lo, https://www.brennancenter.org/analysis/current-citizen-efforts-reform-redistricting.

 

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 -Stephanie Sandra

Stephanie's Compare/Contrast Essay on Seating in Cars: Advanced Composition

Take Your Seat

            “I call shotgun!” This phrase is widely understood because of what it means. If someone says this when the car being used is in view, they call dibs on the passenger seat in the front of the car. When I was driving home from school with my little brother, I figured it out. I realized that when you sit in the driver’s seat, your perspective on your surroundings is quite different from that of a passenger. What I experience as the car’s driver varies from what the person in the passenger or rather “shotgun” seat experiences. While sitting in the driver’s seat may sound more appealing, the “shotgun” seat truly is the best seat.  

Drivers and passengers differentiate in their focus and concentration. As someone sitting in the driver’s seat, it is essential that their focus is on the road ahead. Their primary focus is what is happening in every direction of the car. Passengers have more freedom since they do not have to be as focused. Conversely, it is crucial that drivers are in fact focused and defensive; they need to be ready to step on the brake pedal if something goes awry. Individuals sitting in the “shotgun” seat can do more. They can change the music on the radio for as long or as little as they want. Passengers can distribute the snacks during long road trips. Drivers must keep their eyes on the road. Keeping an eye out for other incoming cars or looking for the right time to merge are two key components of being a safe driver. The eyes of a passenger, on the other hand, are free to wander. They can be looking out the window, taking a nap, or even not paying attention. It is less important for the passengers to stay focused on their surroundings because it is not their responsibility to drive the car. Drivers cruise rather than watch. They concentrate rather than rest. Drivers take full responsibility for whatever happens because they are operating the vehicle. Therefore, a “shotgun” passenger is better because they are just along for the ride. They have the luxury of being near the driver, but they are not the ones operating the automobile. Passengers riding “shotgun” also benefit because they get to see a larger view than someone in the backseat of the car.  Passengers watch rather than cruise. They rest rather than concentrate. Drivers are the pilots while passengers can sit back and relax. The individuals who sit in the “shotgun” seat have access to all the controls in the car, unlike passengers in the back seat.  The person in the driver’s seat makes things happen while the person in the passenger’s seat watches things happen.

            So, when you are riding in a car with a group of people, you should make sure that you are the one that calls “shotgun.” You want to reap all the benefits without having to complete the task that requires concentration and responsibility.

-Stephanie Sandra

 

Stephanie's Future Federal Agent Career: AP Government Creative Assignment

Life as a Federal Agent: Behavioral Analyst

            If I were to have a job in the federal government, I would be interested in many careers.  If I were to choose just one career path, however, I would choose to be a behavioral analyst in the Federal Bureau of Investigation (FBI). I have always found psychology fascinating, and I think that this career highlights how psychology can be used to understand the motives of individuals based on their behavior and choices. To give specifics, I would want to be a Behavioral Analyst working in the Behavioral Analysis Unit (BAU). Behavioral Analysts working for the FBI in the BAU are given the tasks of reassembling a crime scene based on the evidence, establishing a profile about the perpetrator by analyzing key patterns in behavior, and working with various law enforcement agencies to identify the best way to move forward with the case. They may also participate in interviewing any suspects to obtain insight into the perpetrator’s actions and motives. The FBI’s mission is to protect the citizens of the United States while still upholding the Constitution. Through their assessment, they do everything they can to find the person who committed the crime while still following the mission of the FBI to protect and save lives of American people. The FBI’s motto is “fidelity, bravery, and integrity,” a slogan created by former FBI inspector W.H Drane Lester. This motto emphasizes the high standards that the FBI follows when proceeding as an organization in the federal bureaucracy.

The FBI was established in 1908 during Teddy Roosevelt’s presidency with the purpose of investigating violations of the law regarding crimes.  At the time, it was highly controversial. Teddy Roosevelt appointed a man named General Charles Bonaparte to Attorney General once he was elected president. Since both Roosevelt and Bonaparte shared the same views regarding “progressivism,” they had a similar mindset in best assisting the government. Bonaparte applied progressivist methods to the Department of Justice when he became Attorney General. He established a small group of special agents, who would become the first members of the FBI. The BAU is part of an organization within the FBI called the “National Center for the Analysis of Violent Crime (NCAVC) and the Operations Support Branch (OSB).” The BAU consists of five different units within these two groups and have special concentrations which include counterterrorism, threats, crimes against adults, crimes against children, and research accompanied with strategy.

The criteria for this career consists of a long road ahead. One must become an FBI agent before they become a Behavioral Analyst working for the FBI. To meet the requirements of an FBI agent, one must obtain a four-year college degree. Speaking a foreign language fluently looks to be a strength when one applies for an FBI agent position. Then, one applies to the FBI Academy to go through a 4-month training session that is very demanding. However, they must be between the ages of 23 and 37 to apply to the FBI Academy. An individual is also required to undergo and pass a background check, polygraph exam, credit check, and drug test before they can work in the FBI. While in the FBI Academy, one will undergo classroom experience that concentrates in the following subject areas: interviewing, psychology, and legal issues. The FBI Academy will also train the students in using firearms and strengthen their bodies physically as all students must go through a rigorous fitness program. After an individual graduates from the FBI Academy, they should be willing to relocate if necessary once they receive orders to go to a specific FBI Field Office. An individual could be stationed in DC or Quantico, Virginia. However, they could also be placed elsewhere in the United States if they are given the orders. Most people who work in the BAU, especially as Behavioral Analysts, had been working in some variety of an FBI Field Office for at least seven years before they transfer into the BAU. Then, once they join the BAU, they undergo another training process that means working with a mentor. The mentor is an experienced “Agent-Profiler.” The training with a mentor goes on for about two years. Like mentioned before, it is a long and strenuous process to become someone who works in the Behavioral Analysis Unit. This is also the point when an individual chooses what unit (or units) they would like to specialize in. One can choose to either specialize or generalize in their careers from crimes regarding adults, children, any abductions, or missing person’s case, etc.  The medial annual salary for this career falls between $60,000 and $80,000. The career also provides healthcare benefits, insurance benefits, retirement benefits, safety benefits, and paid vacation holidays.

In 2016, the FBI’s annual budget was $8.7 billion according to the Department of Justice’s website.  In Trump’s budget, however, the FBI will be facing some tighter standards. Almost 2,100 positions are being cut in Trump’s budget proposal. That being said, 450 jobs will be added. Yet, this still does not cover the individuals whose jobs are being eliminated.

After completing this assignment, I observed how demanding it is to work in the FBI. However, I think I would enjoy working as a Behavioral Analyst in the BAU if I were to get that far because this career incorporates all my strengths as a person. It involves analysis and writing, and I find that I am an analytical and thorough thinker. As someone who participates in debate and forensics, I find that the public speaking or interviewing portion would not bother me. As a tennis player who also runs on a regular basis, I think that fitness program or even the heightened risk of working in the FBI would not be the most difficult parts of the career. I think that looking at such violent crimes on a regular basis with the intention of helping people and preventing the bad guys from hurting anymore people would be the toughest part. Seeing what humans are capable of in a negative way would probably be what I would find so horrifying. Yet, I think that defending the country, upholding the Constitution, and saving lives would be a wonderful thing to do on a daily, monthly, and yearly basis, making any disadvantage of the job outweighed.  

 

https://www.fbiagentedu.org/careers/intelligence/fbi-behavioral-analyst/

 

https://www.fbijobs.gov/working-at-FBI/benefits

-Stephanie Sandra

Stephanie's Identity: AP Literature and Composition

People and places can have a magical effect on an individual and help influence reactions, responses, and behaviors.  People I know and places I have spent time have helped shape my identity. My friends and family, individuals whom I love dearly, have helped me find who I truly am. My interactions with my family and friends create a sense of security and happiness, allowing for joy and warmth in my life. I feel safe with these people because I can be myself. I can grow; I can flourish as a person. Inside jokes or serious conversations prompt a laugh, a smile, or a tear. All these responses allow a person to find where they belong or feel like they matter. Without my friends and family, I would feel lost. Every friend or family member has impacted my life in some way. Places can also play a role in shaping an individual.  My family, in particular, has a deep association with a place that I feel has contributed to many aspects of my individuality. As someone who has moved around for all her life, it seems as if I have only one “permanent” home. Traverse City, Michigan has been my safe landing and what I call “home.” My family and I have vacationed here since I was born.

Because I always return to this same house on the same lake during the same days within a calendar year, it provides me with a sense of familiarity and routine.  If I were to lose this special place, I would feel disoriented.  A part of me would be missing. What is “home” for many people is a rooted place. My family’s cottage on Lake Leelanau is part of what makes this my “home”, but it is also the city itself. Without the buttered sourdough toast from 45th Parallel Café on a summer morning or the succulent and bittersweet cherries from one of the many cherry orchards, this whole place would lose all meaning. Part of what makes Traverse City so meaningful to me is the fact that I know I can always go back. It’s always there. I have abundant memories associated with this location as I grew up here every summertime and had some of my first-ever experiences. I learned how to waterski, drive a boat, drive a car, kayak, canoe, play volleyball, ride a horse, and tie my shoes. When I go back to my familiar spot, memories such as my firsts come rushing back to the point where I can almost relive them. My family contributes to these Traverse-City related memories because of their role in making each memory so special. When I was first able to slalom ski, my mom, dad, grandpa, and sister were cheering on the other side of the ski rope on the boat because of my huge accomplishment.  Even though I gave my grandpa vertigo the first time I drove a car, I still have a fun, light-hearted memory regarding a first-ever experience whenever I look at his Jeep. Each memory I have in Traverse City is unique. It plays a role in my identity because of the life qualities that I have learned from spending so much time here. Because I have been acclimated to the cottage on Lake Leelanau since 2002, it would be so hard for me to say goodbye. My whole childhood has been associated with this place because of all my past endeavors. Despite only growing up here in the summertime, Traverse City showed me that it could still be considered my childhood home because it is up to you to define a place and its worth in your life.

 -Stephanie Sandra

 

 

 

Advanced Composition: The Knuckle Ninny- An Exaggerated Case of A Bad Habit

The Knuckle Ninny

            Winnie E. Worries had a bad case of the worries. Her middle name was “Excessively,” which happened to be an unfortunate family name from her mother’s side. Winnie’s worries prevented her from having fun because she would constantly fret about the future with every “what if” scenario. Her worries overwhelmed her to the point where it was nearly suffocating. Like her middle name said, she worried excessively.

            Agonizing, overthinking, brooding, and panicking were all things that Winnie experienced on a regular basis. She had trouble concentrating because of her constant worrying. This trait became an issue for Winnie because of how irrational she was becoming.  Winnie started to imagine things being worse than they really were. When she had a headache, she thought she had a brain tumor. Winnie could not think clearly or focus on reality because she was so caught up in the future by overreacting to every little thing. As a coping method, Winnie cracked her knuckles frequently. When she woke up and a worry emerged, she cracked her knuckles. When she was waiting in line at the department store to return something, she cracked her knuckles. The cracking noise somewhat soothed her by bringing her back to a more peaceful state of mind. When Winnie cracked her knuckles, she was distracted from the real world. It was a successful coping method that worked for a small period of time.

            After adopting this new method, Winnie noticed some changes in her hands. They were blowing up like balloons that had too much helium. Her hands appeared as large as big boxing gloves. They were getting bigger and bigger like a weed in a garden. Once Winnie noticed these unfortunate changes in her appearance, it only made her worry more. She was diagnosed with arthritis.  Due to the excessive habit she had adopted, however, there was no cure for her hands. To make matters worse for Winnie, winter was approaching. As a resident of Wisconsin, the weather grew cold and dreary. Warm gloves were the best way to survive a Wisconsin winter, but wearing gloves proved to be a problem for Winnie because she couldn’t fit her large hands into any pair of gloves.  She contracted hypothermia, making her a functional invalid.  People began referring to her as the “Knuckle Ninny.”

             Winnie was at her worst by the time spring came around. Her hand nerves no longer functioned because of her excessive case of hypothermia. To make matters even worse, her bad habit got her into even more trouble.  When it was Winnie’s turn to go to jury duty, she was stuck. She couldn’t drive with her swollen hands that would not fit into gloves. There was also nobody around for miles because Winnie lived in a rural part of Wisconsin. As a result, Winnie did not make it to jury duty. Not much later, the police showed up to arrest the “Knuckle Ninny.” Winnie E. Worries was last seen when the police attempted to handcuff her, but due to the size of her hands, were not successful.  

-Stephanie Sandra

           

             

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Advanced Composition: A Narrative Essay- Stephanie Sandra's Eighth Birthday Catastrophe

Stephanie Sandra’s Eighth Birthday Catastrophe

Birthdays were one of the best things about being a child.  A joyful and exciting day where the attention centralizes on you and your coming of age.  You are still young but growing one year older. It's a celebratory day and moment!  As someone turning eight and feeling like a queenie beanie, I had the whole day planned out.  It was the most ideal eighth birthday. I would go swimming, make the best ice cream sundae to demolish in seconds, spend the day with my family, open gifts, and eat a fondue dinner and dessert at my favorite restaurant: The Melting Pot.  Life was at its sweetest moment on Thursday, August 12th, and nothing was going to change the outcome of the 13th.  I could barely sleep because of how excited I was that I was turning eight whole digits.  After all, that was one whole hand and three fingers on the other hand. Being a quirky child, I had the alarm noise of “Your phone is ringing. Bum Bum. Ringing. Bum. Ringing!” to wake myself up every morning.  I have never been more annoyed with a ringtone to this day, but it really was one of my favorite things to wake up to in the morning because of its happy, but very aggravating energy.  It was my birthday today! Being the “class act” that I was, I angelically sang myself happy birthday as I danced and twirled my way over to my calendar to cross out August 13th with a fresh-inked permanent black Sharpie.  The gratification that I felt as I crossed off August 13th on my puppy- themed calendar was at its finest.  I made my way downstairs to be greeted by the presence of my parents, siblings, grandparents, and cousins and the delicious aroma of raspberry vanilla French toast.  The sweet aroma of the kitchen was wonderful. Every whiff of raspberry French toast made me feel happier about my exhilarating, celebratory day. I was eight! Well-almost.  I would not be eight until 7:53 p.m. that day.  Because I was born in Australia, a country that is 16 hours ahead in time, I was technically already eight years young. I heard chitter chatter from all my family members on my way down to the kitchen from my bedroom. My triplet cousins were busily engaged in an intense Mario Kart Nintendo DS race.  I did not care. I was so grateful for the people that were there to celebrate with me.  I sensed that it would be a wonderful day!  I would be surrounded by all the important people in my life, and I would soon be eating gooey and melty cheese fondue for dinner!

As exciting as my birthday started out that day, I can honestly say that I do not remember what happened until about lunchtime.  This is where the story starts to get interesting.  My sister, Caroline, decided to steal my thunder at my pool party by complaining of sharp pains in her abdomen.  What I did not realize was that she had been experiencing these pains for about a week and a half.  However, because of my sister being a hypochondriac, my parents thought that she was overexaggerating her pain.  She seemed more distant on my birthday, making my parents start to sense something could be really wrong.  Normally, she was jovial and upbeat, but this day was different. Her face was a pale pink, and she embodied all the characteristics of a sick individual.  Her dark-colored hazel eyes looked lighter, but not in a good way.  Caroline also barely touched my succulent birthday breakfast, which was also her favorite.  She tried not to complain as she knew that this day was so important to me.  Caroline did not want to upstage me on my special day, but unfortunately, she did.  I was not there when my mom and dad knew she wasn't exaggerating, but I remember exactly how I felt as I watched them pull out of the driveway without saying goodbye to me.  Why did my mom and dad leave with Caroline so suddenly?  The emotions that I was feeling were so immense.  It was like I was holding my precious, tiny heart in my hands and as I watched them drive away, I left it to shatter into thousands of little pieces.  My grandmother said, "It's ok, Stephy. They'll be back soon." 

So, if I claimed that I spent the day entirely alone, I would be slightly exaggerating.  I still had a decent birthday.  There was just a little hiccup in the day because my sister had to go to the hospital immediately and take my mom and my dad with her.  My cousins and I were playing Super Mario Bros on our synced Nintendo’s when my grandmother received a phone call from my mother.  We learned that Caroline had appendicitis.  I had no idea what that meant, but I was still furious.  On the way to the hospital and feeling outraged, I foraged for a piece of paper and a purple-inked pen in the backseat.  Tears flooding my eyes, my emotion recklessly guided the pen across the page.  I fiercely wrote for about a page, but the only words that I remember clearly are, "I hate you Caroline. You ruined my birthday. You ruin everything!" because I felt an extreme frustration with what she did to me.  I was so angry at Caroline that I could not put what I was feeling into clear words.  My letter declared my hatred for her because she ruined my birthday.  I wanted to punch a wall and cry.  I wanted others to feel sympathy for me and pity.  Since it was my celebratory day, I felt that it was so unfair for Caroline to take that joy away from me and my special day with her appendicitis.  Now, my clueless but loving grandmother thought I was being a kind sister and writing a nice, comforting note to my older sister.  How could she know what devious things I was up to when she was watching five young children for a few hours?  Grandy drove us to the hospital, and I was ready to hand deliver my note to the wonderful person who “ruined” my day.  Luckily, my mother intercepted my furious letter before I could give it to Caroline.  My sister already felt horrible about messing up my day, but as an annoyed eight-year-old, I was unaware of this.  I thought that she was purposely out to get me and ruin my birthday because I was a child.  My mother took me aside, and we had a meaningful chat in the hospital lobby.  My mom looked in my eyes and said, "Caroline is having emergency surgery. She has to get her appendix removed."  Confused, I stood quiet.  What does that even mean, I thought.  Comprehending my misunderstanding of what an appendix is, my mother went into finer detail.  She then sternly said, "I hope you know that Caroline really did not want this to happen. She had been complaining of her pains for a while, but I didn't listen. You should not be mad at her. You should be glad that your sister is going to be okay. You need to grow up and stop being so selfish!"  My tears calmed down and settled to a steady flow rather than the torrential deluge that they were.  No words came out of my mouth, but my mom and I embraced after I started to feel less upset.  I learned a valuable lesson.  I should not be focused solely on the well-being of myself.  I needed to be considerate of others and how they feel because the world did not revolve around me.  Not everything was about me, and sometimes, life goes in an unplanned direction and you must learn how to deal with it.  This event highlighted the importance of growing up and being less selfish as everything does not revolve around you.  I was eight at the time that this occurred, and because I was so frustrated at Caroline for having appendicitis surgery and my family leaving me to be at her side, I did not even think about how it was hard for her because of the pain and the suffering that she endured.  Yes, she had complained about stomach pains before, but she was thought to have been experiencing another hypochondriac moment.  In no circumstance would it have been appropriate to write an atrociously mean letter to her for screwing up my birthday.  This event taught me how to become more empathetic.

When the splendid birthday plan of mine started to fall apart, I was not prepared for it.  My reaction and writing of the letter created a memory that still haunts me because of how horrible of a sister I almost was. Writing that horrendous letter to my sister is definitely at the top of my list for being one of the worst things I have ever done. I am so appreciative that my mother intercepted that letter from me. Eventually Caroline learned of the behind-the-scenes circumstances that took place regarding this unfortunate event. However, at the time, Caroline did not mean to delay my special birthday plans by having appendicitis. It just happened. Life throws things at you, and you must know how to handle the unexpected. If this were to occur today, I would be more forgiving.  I would also be more accustomed to a sudden change by learning how to adapt to the scenario. Instead of having my ideal birthday celebration at the pool and a delicious fondue restaurant, I could throw a party in the hospital waiting room with Jell-O cups and chocolate milk, or I could postpone my birthday to a time when everyone is healthy and can enjoy the day for what it truly represents.  This circumstance highlighted the importance of shifting towards a "go with the flow" life approach, which I embody more to this day.  There was no need for me to act irrationally and angrily.  I understand how I could have been frustrated, but the way I reacted was completely unacceptable.  At least now, my family and I have a funny story to laugh about regarding my eighth birthday and how nothing can ever come close in comparison because after all, it was Friday the 13th.

-Stephanie Sandra

Advanced Composition: A Day as a One Dollar Bill Called Sir TJ Big Buck

A Day in the Life of Sir TJ Big Buck

            Welcome to the life of Sir TJ Big Buck. If I told you my life was interesting, I would be lying because today’s life is quite dark within the wallet of Carrier #45789.  I think my current owner’s name is Stephanie, but it has been a while since my journey began in 2008 after leaving the United States Mint. I have a hard time figuring out my owner’s name in the time span that my carriers have me, but I remember the number of people who have possessed my wonderful self.

Stephanie’s purse smells like cinnamon and gingerbread cookies. This is probably due to the several gum wrappers living with me. It smells cozy and heartwarming, smelling much better than the metallic-like scent I grew up with at the Mint. Stephanie nestled me between a pocket full of credit cards and a Kansas driver’s license. Let me be the first to tell you that her license picture is a horrid sight to see! Oh wait - I see a glimpse of light! She’s opening her wallet to retrieve me. Buckle up for an adventure with Sir TJ Big Buck because life just became real fascinating. I am leaving my temporary home!

Stephanie’s icy-cold fingers hand my green, good-looking figurine accompanied by another bill worth twenty-dollars, a penny, a nickel, and a dime to a young sixteen-year-old working at a Target cash register. I say my last goodbyes to Stephanie as she walks away with her newly-bought treasure. I did not know her long enough to experience any form of separation anxiety. I move on with my day as the girl at the register places me into a dull, dark chest with other members of my family. Not soon after, I am exposed to another glimpse of light. I am given to an older man, who uses his wrinkled hands to place me into a duct-tape wallet. This man is one of two things. He is either weird, or he has a wallet that a grandchild gave him as a gift last holiday season. Let’s cross our fingers that he is a kind grandfather with an atrocious wallet that he received as a gift. It smells rubbery in my new home, making me feel homesick from Stephanie’s cinnamon-scented purse.

I spend a few hours in this rubber wallet, so I become acclimated to my surroundings. His wallet is less entertaining than the dull register at Target. It is me and a couple balls of lint. My acclimation to the many knick-knacks in his wallet is soon interrupted when the man picks me up and places me into a picture frame. I become outraged once I comprehend what he is doing with me. I yell, “A picture frame! Seriously? I am meant to be spent! Why are you placing me behind glass jail bars, old man?” It is no use. The old man is most likely deaf anyway, so I might as well save my voice from any stress. I see the reflection of myself in a nearby mirror. I notice that there is writing above my placement in the picture frame. It reads, “To My Number One.” Once I see this, I am no longer angry because I see a bright smile appear on a nearby face. As a dollar bill, I do not normally make a difference because of my single numerical value. As a pun in a picture frame, the humor of my nickname is finally asserted. I am truly worth one big, brilliant buck.

  • TJ= Thomas Jefferson- the face on the one dollar bill

-Stephanie Sandra

Attempting a One Syllable Story: AP Literature and Composition I

            I watched her as she drove out of the street in her blue car.  Clear tears streamed down her light, pale face. The dark blue of her car matched the way she felt.  She was hurt.  She was let down.  Kate had reached a low point in her life.  Who knew words could rip your soul out in the way she felt hers had been?  I did that. I hurt her. I told her she could make it in the book world and I took that from her. I may have killed her heart, soul, and mind. Her bright mind! Her big heart! They were one of a kind…or so I thought.  She put her own life into her tales. This was her dream. When she wrote, words would rush the page. Her words told a truth that was too hard to tell.  Now her one dream she worked towards for the past six years was just gone.  I thought she could do it. I thought she could thrive. What she did not think was for the book to turn on her. I thought her words would be the start of her path. Like her, I did not think to see those words would wind up as the end. I did this to her. I hurt her. I told her she could do it. Now, I can’t take it back. It’s done.

-Stephanie Sandra

Life of Pi Passage Reflection: AP Literature and Composition I

“Things didn’t turn out the way they were supposed to, but what can you do? You must take life the way it comes at you and make the best of it” (91)

This passage is important to the novel because it puts Pi’s life into a bigger perspective. He has just learned that he is moving from Pondicherry, India to Canada. Pi feels anxious and concerned about this new change in his life. To cope with this change, he falls back to his religious beliefs, influenced by his religious background that includes elements of Hinduism, Islam, and Christianity to help him view the move in a broader context. This passage highlights Pi’s trust in God and where his faith will take him in life.  For all his life, Pi has known Pondicherry to be his sweet and beloved home. The zoo animals were his family because he had watched them and befriended them for years of his childhood. Once his family decided to move to Canada, his whole life changed in an instant. This passage introduces the readers to Pi’s ability to adapt and be flexible. Pi has a strong belief in God and God’s influence on events. If something were to happen, Pi views it as directly part of God’s will. Pi accepts God’s will and does not try to question the reasons for it. Rather, he focuses on how he will adapt to the changes. When something goes awry, Pi learns to make the best of a bad situation. Pi’s love for religion has helped him persevere through uncomfortable life situations, teaching him how to formulate a flexible response. His family is leaving India for political reasons, forcing him to re-adapt to a new place. However, instead of being sour about the relocation, he becomes adaptable. An aspect of Hinduism is Dharma, which embodies ethics and duties. It is Pi’s duty to use this move to Canada as a sign from God that moving to Canada is part of Pi’s life plan.  Hinduism also focuses on the traditional idea of the Brahman, highlighting the importance of power and a soul. This passage ties together most of what Pi has stated throughout the novel regarding religion. It incorporates his religious beliefs into his day to day life. This new chapter in Pi’s life illuminates the faith that he puts into God, believing that it is his duty to go through with it. The question, “but what can you do” emphasizes that there is no other choice. He must get on this boat and travel until he reaches Canada, which is this unknown and unfamiliar place.  Rather than feeling pity, he looks at leaving Pondicherry as a good thing. Pi’s passion for religion has taught him the significance in moving with the flow of things and looking for an element of good. He does not have to panic. Instead, he must embody aspects of his religious background and use that to begin his new life adventure with a positive mindset.

This passage resonated with me because of how relatable I found it to be to my own circumstances. I have moved four times and have lived in five different places, which is like Pi moving this one time.  It is upsetting to leave your friendships, but it is exciting to embark on a new adventure. Moving to other places has taught me how to maintain relationships and hold on to certain passions of mine, despite having to be in a different place. I have had no choice other than to move and readjust every time I encountered this situation. I have had to take every day as its own and live as best as I could. The universe has a plan, so it is only right to try and face that plan with as much bravery and determination as you possibly can. It is challenging to leave what you know behind and adjust to new surroundings because of its unfamiliarity, but it can end up being a good thing. Moving to Kansas seemed like a horrible thing at first, but it ended up being one of the best things that could ever happen to me. Pi and I both learned how to take negative a situation and spin it into something positive based on our beliefs.

-Stephanie Sandra

Exploration Essay: AP Literature and Composition I

Traverse City, Michigan

Life has never been simple for me. I have never had one place I could call “home”, because I have never lived in one place permanently. Every time I become accustomed to my new living situation, I must pack up and leave again. What I call home is not the typical home for someone who has lived in the same area their entire life.  My home is a place that I travel to every summer. Michigan has become my home. It evokes a sense of nostalgia because of the memories that rush to my head when thinking of Traverse City, a small community on the shores of Lake Michigan in the northern part of the lower peninsula of Michigan. It is a tradition. My father vacationed to Traverse City as a child and once he married my mother, they decided to keep up this family tradition. Instead of renting out different condos or vacationing on multiple lakes, they decided to make this vacation place something more tangible by buying a house on Lake Leelanau.

My dad loves his career, but frequent moves has become one of the downsides of his career. So, our vacation home would become the permanent home that my siblings and I could always be rooted to despite our relocating to new places whenever my dad changed jobs. After moving around several times, Traverse City is the only place that has remained stable within my life; it has remained unchanged. In my eyes, it is the place I grew up. Traverse City and our house on the banks of Lake Leelanau is my childhood home. There are so many elements from Traverse City that make it seem like home.

Traverse City is a place like no other. It is so unique! Despite its small population size, it is full of interesting quirks and fun energies. Traverse City is the cherry capital of the world! Local farmers grow more cherries than anywhere else in the world.  Every summer, my family and I go to one of the nearby areas with cherry trees and go cherry picking. The tart crimson cherries are an important part of every significant Traverse City meal. The cherries are incorporated into many dishes: pies, jams, pancakes, ice cream flavors, and cakes. When my younger cousins eat some of the cherries, the crimson juice run down their faces, making them look like vampires. The Traverse City Cherry Festival celebrates the community’s role as the cherry capital of the world every year in late June and working its way into early July. We normally buy cherry pies at this festival after watching the famous dog jumping contest hosted at the festival. On the Fourth of July, my family has the tradition of taking part in a pie eating contest with the hope of pie-ing a family member of their choice as the winning prize. Another special flavor from this place is the Leelanau Raclette cheese. I have always considered myself to be a cheese connoisseur and this cheese has become a distinctive element to my vacation there every summer. It also is one of my favorite cheeses to eat as an appetizer with a baguette slice.  One of my favorite places to go to eat in Traverse City is “Moomers”, which was voted by Good Morning America as the best ice cream shop in America. My family and I also enjoy 45th Parallel, a breakfast place located exactly halfway between the Equator and the North Pole. They have the best buttered sour dough toast to accompany any breakfast meal.

Another key landmark to Traverse City, is a shore with miles and miles of sand This landmark is called the “Sleeping Bear Sand Dunes”. Long ago, massive glaciers amplified river valleys to sculpt extensive basins in the Great Lakes. The glaciers also established dunes formed by glacial sands on high plateaus. The scenic views you can get from the top of the established dunes are spectacular! Travelling to the top of the dune to Lake Michigan, you are about 450 feet from the ground. The height is crazy, but well worth the view. For as long as I can remember, my family has come to this landmark every year. We climb up the sand dunes and roll down. Some of my fondest memories as a child are from the Sleeping Bear Dunes. Legend has it that a mother bear assisted her two cubs in finding shelter to escape a forest fire, hence the name “Sleeping Bear Dunes”. I have always loved this legend because it showed how loyal the mother bear was to her children and highlighted to me the importance of family in a different light.

These special flavors and fun places are only small pieces that make up Traverse City as a home. Being on a lake, near beaches and orchids is always fun. Yet, the best part about Traverse City is the family tradition that we have created that no other place could ever try to replace. Traverse City is the home to cherries, Leelanau Raclette, the Sleeping Bear Sand Dunes, one of the best ice cream shops in America, and my permanent and forever home.

-Stephanie Sandra

Reflecting on Passages from an Article: AP Literature and Composition I

“Does being a leader, I wondered, just mean being accomplished, being successful? Does getting straight A’s make you a leader? I didn’t think so. Great heart surgeons or great novelists or great shortstops may be terrific at what they do but that doesn’t mean they’re leaders.” (2)

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The narrator, William Deresiewicz, writes this article with the purpose of highlighting the role of leaders in society. He emphasizes the true definition of leadership by providing examples in a real-life context. Deresiewicz defines leadership as a role that strongly demonstrates an individual’s courage from a moral and an ethical perspective.  However, he has come to find that in today’s world, examples of true leaders are lacking and are hard to find. One reason for this is that people sometimes confuse success and accomplishment with leadership. Individuals can be successful by operating within a system and following the rules. Deresiewicz emphasizes that leadership is about having independent thought and creative ideas and being able to implement those ideas. People who have those qualities and are true leaders are in short supply. Deresiewicz portrays leaders as individuals who may be more silent than the typical stereotype. This characteristic of leadership is significant because it illustrates that introverts can still be effective as leaders, regardless of whether they are vocal or outgoing.

This specific passage resonated with me because it highlighted the difference between success and leadership. The timeless adage, “actions speak louder than words”, reinforces how your behavior and choices are more important than your words. People may be tempted to shy away from a position of leadership because of their quiet personalities. Yet, quiet personalities can become strong leaders if they exhibit a sense of direction and focus. As someone who identifies with an introvert more than an extrovert, I found this line immediately striking. You do not have to have to be loud or successful to be an effective leader. A leader can come in various shapes and sizes. From this article, I learned that I could have the potential to be a leader because I follow through on my commitments, I try to think first, I listen, I advocate for myself, and I set examples for others to follow. I have always been a motivated student, driven by big goals of being accepted into a prestigious college, which will lead me to a successful career. This passage illustrated that whatever career I end up having is worthless unless I exhibit qualities of a leader. This passage reminds me that I do have the potential of becoming a leader because of the various kinds of leaders that can exist, if I adapt to the rapidly changing world and continue to think independently. I came to the realization while reading this passage that I value the qualities of leadership that Deresiewicz defined and those are the traits that will help define my future success.  

-Stephanie Sandra

Year from Now Contemplation: Advanced Composition

Stephanie’s Journey to Finding a College Major

The future was a stressful thing to think about.  The anxiety that it induced used to be traumatizing.  That paralyzing feeling I would get when the air could barely pass through my lungs, trapped in a never-ending state of panic.  I felt like I was drowning and no matter how hard I tried to stay afloat, I could not help but sink.  As a high school senior, college is right around the corner.  What a lovely, but scary thought to a teenager, especially one who felt already lost.  Every little test or paper from the past three years add up to grades that accumulate into a GPA.  That enough was the tipping point for my anxiety because of the constant pressure I would put on myself to do the best that I could.

I, Stephanie Sandra Gentile, was now a newly seventeen-year old senior in high school and a future college freshman.  Since I began high school, people always pestered me about what I wanted to do with my life.  I did not have the courage or confidence to tell them, “I still don’t know”.  I thought that by the time I became a senior, I would gain that courage and confidence because I would finally know.  That phrase lingered for the past couple years of high school and most of the summer leading up to my senior year because I still had not reached the life-altering decision about what I wanted to study in college and what path to pursue in my career. 

I had too many academic interests, which is why I felt so lost.  College applications list the option of “undecided” for your major.  Yet, I could not bear the thought of checking that box because I had some ideas just no final conclusion.  I was just having difficulty choosing because of my indecisive nature. I knew that science like biology, chemistry, or physics was not the route for me.  I could not let go of math just yet because I knew that I enjoyed the numerical process of getting to one correct answer.  I always was passionate about history because I loved reading about it and connecting it to current events. I loved how history told a story by providing background on why countries function the way they do.  The detail and analysis of history expanded my horizons on how various ideologies and cultures interacted and shaped events.  I liked the way that history taught me how to write and think, which slightly differed from writing for an English class.  There was persuasion involved in history, just like in a negotiation or an argument.

That summer before senior year, I enrolled in a psychology program at a nearby college.  I thought it would be interesting to learn about human behavior and about a subject that falls within the parameters of science but was not so technical.  The psychology program introduced me to predicting human actions and analyzing their behavior.  This approach connected to history because history analyzes the behavior of individuals and their ideologies in the past.  This program fascinated me and led me to the realization that history and psychology complement each other.  I came to the conclusion that these two academic disciplines would make the perfect combination for me. 

By understanding why humans behave the way they do, one has a better comprehension on how to diagnose and regulate their behavior.  My seventeen-year-old self no longer felt stranded or in a constant state of panic.  The ocean waves running over me were now light and gentle, easy to stay afloat. I knew what boxes to check in my college applications: history and psychology, two academic disciplines that combine all of my academic interests.

-Stephanie Sandra

 

Reflection of Passages in Life of Pi by Yann Martel: AP Literature and Composition I

“This was the terrible cost of Richard Parker. He gave me a life, my own, but at the expense of taking one. He ripped the flesh off the man’s frame and cracked his bones. The smell of blood filled my nose. Something in me died then that has never come back to life. “(255)

This passage is significant to Part II in Life of Pi because it shows a darker moment in Pi’s life. Throughout the novel, Pi has exemplified positive and optimistic behavior as an individual who respects many different faiths. As a child, he was an avid reader, who was eager to learn about many faiths and religions to expand his horizons. As the book evolves and Pi is stranded on a lifeboat, he shifts to a self-sufficient behavior. Pi begins to question his values and morals on the boat as it seems more hopeless that he will survive the devastating circumstances.

Richard Parker and Pi have endured many hardships, including temporary blindness. The two are looking gaunt as their rations are lessening and it is harder to catch fish for sustenance to survive. When Pi and Richard Parker encounter the French individual in their adventure, the plot thickens. Richard Parker sees the French man as a threat when he tries to attack Pi. Defending Pi against a perceived threat, Richard Parker kills the man. Pi is shocked. He feels guilt and regret because one man had to die for Pi to stay alive. He felt partial responsibility for the death of the man because he failed to warn the man of the tiger on the boat. The guilt remains with Pi as he states, “I pray for his soul everyday” (256).

The passage shows further character development in Pi and in Richard Parker. As readers, we are reminded of the animal act of protecting territory. Richard Parker symbolizes instinctive actions for survival and defense, which overcame the behavior of control at that moment of life or death. Pi also transforms because of his traumatic experience. He admits to cannibalism and using the dead man’s flesh as bait for fishing. Pi feels that God is absent from his life because he has had to commit such horrendous acts. This moment is one of the lowest points in Pi’s life and the last sentence really illuminates how this moment influences his journey and his entire life.

As we grow older, we can experience moments that are agonizing. When we reach those moments, the act of escaping is what we want most. Sometimes people cannot identify the source of their suffering, but they understand how much it hurts. This feeling is most relevant when we suffer some sort of trauma, whether it is physical or emotional. When this happens, overwhelming grief from an unfathomable experience can cause us to lose a piece of our soul. The pain can be unimaginable. We can seek in vain for a coping mechanism to address the pain. Now, I have never felt the guilt that Pi feels for being partially responsible for the death of another man. I am young and have thus far been fortunate to avoid a tragedy like the one Pi experiences. Part of being young is being oblivious to pain and tragedy. That being said, I was able to sympathize with Pi. The last part of the passage highlighted to me why adults are wise. The passage of time exposes them to more opportunities for tragedy to strike. Tragedies shape them in a way that they never expected. Life-changing moments can tear away pieces of our soul because of the suffering that we endure. To show our true strength, we must learn how to cope with our pain and suffering to start the process of healing.  

-Stephanie Sandra

The Art of Collecting Broadway Playbills: Advanced Composition

The Art of Collecting Broadway Playbills

Broadway is a state of mind. It’s a swarm of individuals who sing, act, and dance in a miraculous fashion. This lovely energy is what intrigued me about Broadway and its captivating influence in New York City. The yellow-topped magazines called “playbills” that one receives upon entrance to the theater has always been one of my favorite parts of my experience visiting Broadway.  There are two types of people who frequent Broadway shows. The first set are the careless people who toss the playbills aside, walking over them as they leave for intermission or leave the theater. The second set are the people who treasure every word, phrase, or image of the playbill. The second set of people illustrate the true fans of Broadway, which includes me.  These playbills represent a memory. Despite being a simple theater program made of paper, they happened to represent a piece of my life, reminding me of when I would venture into New York City to watch these spectaculars take place on stage. The lustrous lights, colorful costumes, and melodic music would overwhelm my senses and take me into the world of Broadway. I was mesmerized.

My family has always enjoyed singing showtunes. I also used to participate in musical theater classes, dance classes, and voice lessons because I saw myself as a true Broadway superstar. Yet when I visited Broadway, I quickly realized that my dream of being a legendary star was never going to materialize. The reality was crushing but I quickly healed as I swooned over the phenomenon before my very eyes. Not only did the choreography, the people, and the music fascinate me, but the playbills’ photos and messages also caught the attention of my eye.  The advertising of future Broadway productions only pulled me deeper into my collection of playbills. The playbills were a way for me to love Broadway as something I could admire from a distance. My playbill collection of the 5 and 3/8 inches by 8 and ½ inch pamphlets rest in an ordinary laminated binder that I keep in my bedroom. Flipping through endless pages of playbills from shows I have watched instantly bring me back to happy moments from my childhood and lifetime. For a second, I return to the shadows of my childhood, watching a Broadway show in the musical soul of the world. While it may seem that I am collecting an object, I am also collecting an experience. Every time I attend a Broadway production and collect another playbill, I preserve another extraordinary moment and gain another meaningful memory. Seeing musicals take part in the heart of New York City and collecting a piece of the adventure, I capture and remember the unique flavors of this wonderful world.

-Stephanie Sandra

 

Trends Influencing the Passing of Prohibition and the Repeal of Prohibition

Stephanie Sandra Gentile AP US History

            In the early twentieth century, alcohol’s dangers encouraged several groups to engage in temperance movements because alcohol seemed to be overpowering the lives of American citizens.  Many rallied to rid the country of alcoholic beverages. Prohibition became a nationwide ban that made it illegal to produce, import, transport, and sell intoxicating beverages from 1920 to 1933.  Women generally led these temperance movements because they believed alcohol was the root of all evil and believed that banning alcohol would help solve most personal and social problems.  Women and other anti-alcohol supporters believed that through Prohibition, they could alleviate all the problems in society, including poverty, bad hygiene, and crime.  The 18th Amendment forbade the production, importation, transportation, and sale of alcoholic beverages.  Ironically, the amendment did not prohibit the consumption of alcohol. Therefore, any alcoholic beverage that was cached before the prohibition of alcohol in January of 1920 was legal to consume in people’s homes. The 18th Amendment was thought to be a solution that would rid society of all its problems, but it was soon discovered that alcohol and Prohibition negatively impacted society in more ways than one. There were a number of forces that united to create a grand experiment to prohibit alcohol as a way to improve society, an experiment that ultimately failed because it unleashed destructive social, cultural, and political consequences.

There were many social trends that drove individuals to advocate for Prohibition that grew out of the period of reform during the Progressive Era.  During the Progressive Era, temperance movements started to gain traction when the middle class saw an opportunity to adopt temperance movements as part of a standard for self-discipline and upward mobility. The Anti-Saloon League (ASL) collaborated with churches to prohibit alcohol by lobbying for a nationwide prohibition of alcohol with the position that drinking alcohol was damaging American society. The ASL relied on churches for financial aid because of the influence that churches could have in turning people in favor of temperance.  Most of the ASL battles that occurred when collaborating with these church forces were against organized liquor forces. [i] The ASL impacted society’s perspective on alcohol by highlighting the dangers of alcohol for public awareness. [ii] To create an impact on society, the members of the ASL implemented the slogan of “The Church in Action against the Saloon” to show the power of the church when it worked with the people. [iii] By using this slogan, they were able to achieve their goals through focus and intimidation.[iv]  Leaders focused on alcohol as their one specific target because the members of the ASL wanted to free the nation from the strong and mighty grip that the substance could have on individuals. [v] Some of the pivotal leaders in the Anti-Saloon League included Ernest Cherrington and Wayne Wheeler because of their authoritative and persuasive ideas. As someone who was firmly against alcohol, Cherrington thought that the dangers of alcohol could be avoided through education.  Cherrington described the objective of the ASL and anti-alcohol campaigning to be “by all lawful measures to suppress the traffic in and use of intoxicating liquors”. Wayne Wheeler used personal anecdotes to show the detrimental effect that alcohol had on individuals, both mentally and physically.  At a young age, Wheeler was injured by his intoxicated neighbor, which triggered his resentment for alcohol. [vi] In a letter to President Wilson, he displayed his resentment by stating, “The people have requested to have heatless days, meatless days, wheatless days. The breweries and saloons of the country continue to waste foodstuffs, fuel, and manpower and to impair the efficiency of labor in the mines, factories, and even in munition plants near which saloons are located”. [vii] Wheeler detested alcohol and he wanted to see reform in the country to fix the pervasive problem.  Alcohol was not only emotionally destructive for him, but it was also damaging to the country. The dangerous substance had a strong effect on the nation, which in his mind contributed to destroying society.  Alcohol was unintentionally hurting the labor force and the environment because of the alcohol-producing factories that were popping up all over the nation.  Wheeler wanted to see the President, one of the most dominant people in the country, approach the problem with a viable solution.  This letter was an important piece in paving the road to Prohibition.  The Anti-Saloon League played a pivotal role in attempting to save the nation from alcohol’s undeniably powerful grasp, but alcohol proved to have too powerful a hold over the American people once the 18th Amendment passed.  

Another social and influential organization during the Progressive Era that rallied for prohibition was the Women’s Christian Temperance Union (WCTU). The WCTU became the most powerful female reform organization of the 19th and 20th centuries. [viii] One of their goals after the death of their first leader, Frances Willard, was to promote temperance and complete abstinence by campaigning that drinking went against the will of God.  Lisa McGirr wrote about the impacts of the WCTU with one important notation being that the WCTU produced “four decades of peaceful anti-alcohol warfare”.[ix] This alliance showed the significance of uniting together to see a change in society. At first, the WCTU focused on prison reform, women’s suffrage, and labor laws.  Beginning in 1898, members began changing their purpose by rallying for prohibition.  Alcohol had begun taking a nasty toll on society, changing it for the worse.  Prohibition was supposed to bring relief by saving individuals from the menaces of society by bringing awareness to the topic. However, it really exploited the chaotic facets of society when speakeasies were established and bootlegging started to begin. Ella Boole, a member of the WCTU, stated “There would not be any social evil if there was no saloon evil”. Boole refers to prostitution in this euphemism about “social evil”, portraying the dark side that alcohol induces. Her persistent efforts as a WCTU leader was to sway younger generations by bringing awareness about the dangers of alcohol and to limit the number of bars and stores that were permitted to sell liquors. [x] The Women’s Christian Temperance Society had a great impact on educating society on the risks and hazards caused by consuming alcohol. 

Cultural trends also had a great effect on the passing of the 18th Amendment and prohibition, many having to do with religious revivals, national ambiance, and health discoveries. One cultural trend that proved significant in the promoting of anti-alcohol protests was the Second Great Awakening because of its great impact on temperance.  A pivotal element during these series of religious fervors was the ideal of Social Gospel, illuminating the idea of homage and piety as a good and orthodox Christian.[xi]  Individuals rallied against the making, drinking, and selling of any alcoholic beverages because the Bible explicitly stated that drinking was a sin that went against God.  Many churches were quick on their feet to adopt the temperance movements because they wanted to remain good Christians. 

Another influential trend in aiding the prohibition movement was World War I and German sentiment.  American propaganda dehumanized Germans through caricatures and illustrations of them as beer kegs. Newspapers included cartoons portraying the dehumanization of Germans.  Christian temperance movements associated Germans with beer because of the German-sounding brewery names. Members also engaged in advocating that drinking was a “treasonous act”. [xii] The national ambiance for alcohol shifted once more Americans viewed it as unacceptable and morally wrong to enjoy a drink when men were fighting for their lives in the war.  A new patriotism emerged when associated with prohibition.  More Americans decided to stand by their country and on behalf of the people fighting for it than enjoy a nice cold beer.  World War I played a small role in national prohibition because of the anti-German hysteria that was created through the shift in national mood and usages of propaganda.  John Strange, a politician, reported to the Milwaukee Journal, “We have German enemies across the water. We have German enemies in this country, too”.[xiii]  Anti-German hysteria was affecting the portrayal of alcohol in the country as being “good”.  Americans shifted their positive viewpoint on alcohol to a negative viewpoint because of the detrimental health factors and the key role that Germans played in supporting its consumption.  Head of the Committee of Public Information (CPI), George Creel explained, “When the fear was attached to all things German, it proceeded to be like an out-of-control virus”. [xiv] CPI and Creel, both being prime components of spreading propaganda during World War I, depicted the image of Germans negatively to reduce the amount of alcohol consumption and approval.  Like Creel, the Anti-Saloon League used propaganda to its advantage by painting a typical stereotype of Germans as being corrupt, drunken people because they only produced more and more beer.  The German hysteria perpetrated by the ASL and other supporters heavily influenced the passing of the 18th Amendment. [xv]

Other cultural trends that emerged in the twentieth century were health-related discoveries, changing perspectives on what to do and what not to do in regards to alcohol consumption.  Through studies, doctors learned that the alcohol consumption rate in America skyrocketed.  Between 1900 and 1913, the beer production shifted from 1.2 billion gallons to 2 billion gallons. Doctors portrayed it as a depressant and began associating intoxicating beverages with disease, crime, and mental illness. [xvi] These discoveries and shifts in mood had a significant impact on the American culture, affecting the perspectives of many.

After the several social and cultural initiatives started gaining traction in support of Prohibition, the government began to take action politically.  Political legislation included the Lever Food and Fuel Control Act of 1917, the 18th Amendment to the US Constitution (ratified in 1919), and the Volstead Act (of 1919). 

A defining initiative that led to Prohibition was the Lever Food and Fuel Control Act of 1917, which prohibited the transaction, sale, and manufacture of alcohol to soldiers.  Herbert Hoover, the head food administrator, reduced the brewing industries’ available grain by 30%.  Hoover also helped in establishing dry zones around shipyards, coal mines, and naval bases. [xvii]  This reduction created a limit on the production of alcohol, which would later prove its inefficacy when crime rates skyrocketed and individual behaviors reversed.  Presidents, specifically Woodrow Wilson, began speaking out on the controversial and damaging topic of alcohol.  In 1919, 36 states ratified the 18th Amendment, which prohibited the distribution and commercial manufacture of liquor and put it into effect at the federal level. [xviii] Disbelief and political action hastened the passing of Prohibition because people rallied behind restrictions on alcohol by claiming its “hazards”.  President Wilson declared, “this kind of fierce protracted drinking has now become universal, an accepted feature of social life instead of a disreputable escapade”, illustrating how social, cultural, and political trends all converged in providing the federal government a firm grip on alcohol.  [xix] 

Another important factor during Prohibition was the passing of the Volstead Act in October of 1919.  The purpose of the Volstead Act was to outline how the government would enforce the 18th Amendment.  Despite President Wilson’s support for Prohibition, he vetoed the Volstead Act because even he thought it was too strict.  Yet the political momentum was overwhelming.  Congress was easily able to overturn the veto and pass the legislation over his objections. The Volstead Act provided the control and authority to federal authorities over the sale, importation, and production of alcoholic and intoxicating liquor. The Volstead Act defined “intoxicating” as containing 0.5% or more of alcohol in a volume setting, which potentially forbade any alcoholic beverage. [xx] There was one exception to the Volstead Act, that being the distribution of alcohol, which was indeed still possible, but only for medicinal purposes. [xxi]

The Volstead Act produced chaos and was widely disliked, resulting in numerous amendments.  Once the federal government adopted the temperance cause, individuals were more likely to engage in drinking because of the excitement that the secrecy enhanced. After his inauguration and declaration of the Bank War, President Franklin Delanor Roosevelt permitted the transaction and consumption of beer by loosening the alcohol content consumption to nothing more than a 3.2%. His reasoning being, “We could all do with a beer”, showing a loosening of tensions through restrictions of such a strict piece of legislation. [xxii]

Some of the same trends that influenced the passing of Prohibition were the same ones that impacted its repeal because it proved to be a null and void policy.  Prohibition was unenforceable. One of the biggest trends that caused the repeal of Prohibition was the increase in organized crime.  After the passing of the 18th Amendment and the Volstead Act, bootleggers emerged and became quite popular. This term “bootleggers” referred to individuals who smuggled alcoholic beverages even though the law forbade the transportation of liquored substances.  Not only did Prohibition not eliminate drinking, it established a black market that made it impossible for Prohibition to be effectively enforced.  Bootleggers and smugglers discovered successful strategies in illegally transporting alcohol.  For example, in Detroit, bootleggers successfully transported alcohol illegally through hidden compartments, water bottles, misleading suitcase bottoms, and casuistic floorboards in cars. [xxiii] Major crime lords and organizations materialized in society such as the Chicago Outfit and Al Capone. Capone’s focus as a criminal mastermind was to fabricate an international ring of bootleggers.  He constructed the importation of liquor from various areas and also created a system to distribute the alcohol.  Some of these distribution techniques consisted of salespeople, transportation drivers, armed guards, and speakeasies. [xxiv] Capone was quite the mastermind when it came to devising strategies regarding illegal alcohol and its consumption.  Although the government had banned the manufacturing and consumption of alcohol, it did not halt the desires and demands for alcoholic substances. Al Capone saw these demands and desires as a public outcry.  He later stated, “All I do is supply a public demand… somebody had to throw some liquor on that thirst”, trying to justify his wrongdoings as a criminal.  This statement had a huge importance in the era of Prohibition because it proved to be true.  He was making money off what the American people wanted, which was to consume more alcohol.  Capone gained legal immunity by constantly dispensing bribes to any law-enforcing individual that could get him into trouble in the areas where his illegal businesses were operated. [xxv]  Capone used his place in society to avoid any consequence that could interrupt his money-making schemes.  The restrictions and limitations placed on intoxicating beverages were frustrating because people wanted to have fun by enjoying a drink, making Capone’s plans more appealing.  President Roosevelt’s relaxation of the Volstead Act aided in the repealing of Prohibition because once there was more freedom in the consumption of alcohol, people only wanted more of it. 

Al Capone and the Chicago Outfit successfully established the speakeasy as a place where people could drink liquor in a more “private” location.  Instead of drinking alcohol in public, which was illegal, speakeasies were the accepted substitution.  Although in a public place, voices were lowered to avoid gaining any attention. Speakeasies started to become a part of American culture.  New York ended up hosting 32,000 illegal drinking locations by the start of the 1930’s. [xxvi] Speakeasies created new trends to redefine the American culture like the choices in music.  Jazz started to gain popularity, which gangsters used as a marketing strategy in the speakeasies. The music was fun and unique. African Americans who migrated to big cities like New York and Chicago were easily employed to play jazz music in these secret drinking spots. The developments of speakeasies also redefined spontaneity in society by incorporating a secret password for admittance. [xxvii] Al Capone’s creation of the speakeasy indulged America into a darker side that showed alcohol’s horrid effects. 

Prohibition not only changed the locations of where individuals drank, but it also completely changed the type of people who engaged in drinking.  Singer Alec Wilder stated, “A pretty girl in a speakeasy was the most beautiful girl in the world.” [xxviii]The banning of alcohol produced a scandalous side of women in the 1920’s, astonishing many because social life in America was changed forever. Women redefined their identity by stepping outside their traditional boundaries and changing their role in society by spontaneously altering the way they wore their hair and dressed for the public to see. They began to wear knee length dresses and cut their hair into “bob cuts”, factors that swayed the era to be known as the “Roaring Twenties”.  Women were reversing previous cultural and social trends.  Despite the surprised public responses, more women adapted these changes to the point where the new styles became socially acceptable. 

Many industries anticipated that Prohibition would be extremely helpful to their success, however, the complete opposite proved to be the case.  Supporters of Prohibition expected to see the sales for clothing products and household goods to skyrocket.  Once saloons began shutting down, landlords and real estate developers expected to see an increase in rent rates and improvement in neighborhoods. Just like Prohibition was expected to reduce the amount of alcohol consumed, most organizations and companies anticipated growth, but both were proved wrong. Prohibition displayed a decline in both entertainment and amusement industries.  Restaurants failed because they could no longer make the money they needed to stay in business without legal alcoholic beverage sales. [xxix]

During President Roosevelt’s presidency, the Cullen-Harrison Act passed, which legalized the sale of specific alcohols. Yet again, another change was made to the Prohibition legislation.  This showed a loosening in rules because more people wanted to see alcohol return to society.  Since little changes and amendments had been made to Prohibition, many Americans viewed it as acceptable to disobey the law because it was most likely going to change soon anyway.  Eventually, Prohibition proved to be a failure, which lead to its ultimate repeal in December of 1933, with the passing of the 21st Amendment. [xxx]

Prohibition was a disappointment. The objective to eliminate drinking failed the nation when a black market was created that was filled with secrecy. Criminals and random violence were just a few of the consequences that came from prohibition. [xxxi]  The trends that took place in the constantly changing world influenced prohibition because they affected the way that individuals viewed and behaved in society. Prohibition reversed the role that women played in society by redefining all aspects of their behavior: the way they could dress, act, and wear their hair.  Prohibition also served as a watershed event in the event that people became more assertive with their goals by advocating for something that they wanted to see changed. Although the overall goal of Prohibition failed, it brought Americans out of their shells to fight for what they believed was right.  President Herbert Hoover described Prohibition as a “great social and economic experiment, noble in motive and far reaching in purpose”. [xxxii] This quote falsely illustrated the effect of Prohibition during the 1920’s. The “noble experiment” was undertaken to improve society for the better by limiting the number of reported crimes, attempting to solve social issues, and helping Americans with health and hygiene. The goal to eliminate drinking failed because it completely altered society and its morals on what was right and what was wrong. Women became more independent in their actions, gaining strength and confidence. However, this shift in behavior marked the beginning of women becoming more “provocative” in their portrayal.  Crimes became more prevalent as people demanded more alcohol, despite it being forbidden.  Crimes were committed because Prohibition obliterated jobs, established black markets and black market violence, and increased the prices that people had to pay for prohibited goods.  Society became divided over the conflict of how people should behave and to what extent alcohol should play a part in an individual’s lifestyle.  What Americans learned from prohibition is remarkable. Prohibition showed how easy it was for individuals to disrespect society and disobey the law.  It created big businesses like bootlegging and speakeasies, showing how easy it was to fall to the dark side.  Alcohol had overpowered the nation by taking control, which made it difficult to completely eliminate its presence in public places.  Instead of improving society, Prohibition hurt society because of that drastic consequences that came from it.  In conclusion, Prohibition failed to accomplish its goals. Rather than fixing the alcoholic epidemic, it added to the problems it was supposed to solve through the social, cultural, and political ramifications it unleashed that redefined America.

-Stephanie Sandra

Notes

 

[i] Cherrington, History of the Saloon League, 61.

[ii] Blocker, Did Prohibition Really Work, American Journal of Public Health. www.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov/pmc/articles/PMC1470475/.

[iii] Okrent, Last Call, 37.

[iv] Okrent, 36.

[v] Okrent, 37.

[vi] Cherrington, 99.

[vii] Okrent, 99.

[viii] McGirr, The War on Alcohol, 9.

[ix] McGirr, 126.

[x] McGirr, 15.

[xi] McGirr, 9.

[xii] Blocker. , www.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov/pmc/articles/PMC1470475/.

[xiii] Okrent, 100.

[xiv] Okrent, 101.

[xv] Thornton, Prohibition was a Failure. www.cato.org/publications/policy-analysis/alcohol-prohibition-was-failure.

[xvi] Blocker. , www.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov/pmc/articles/PMC1470475/.

[xvii] Okrent. 99.

[xviii] Moore, Actually Prohibition Was a Success. www.nytimes.com/1989/10/16/opinion/actually-prohibition-was-a-success.html.

[xix] Okrent, 206.

[xx] Sandbrook, How Prohibition Backfired and Gave America an Era of Gangsters and Speakeasies. www.theguardian.com/film/2012/aug/26/lawless-prohibition-gangsters-speakeasies.

[xxi] Okrent, 193.

[xxii] Sandbrook. www.theguardian.com/film/2012/aug/26/lawless-prohibition-gangsters-speakeasies.

[xxiii] Sandbrook. www.theguardian.com/film/2012/aug/26/lawless-prohibition-gangsters-speakeasies.

[xxiv] Hales and Kazmers, Organized Crime: How It was Changed by Prohibition. www.umich.edu/~eng217/student_projects/nkazmers/organizedcrime2.html.

[xxv] Lerner, Unintended Consequences of Alcohol. www.pbs.org/kenburns/prohibition/unintended-consequences/.

[xxvi] Okrent, 207.

[xxvii] Thornton. www.cato.org/publications/policy-analysis/alcohol-prohibition-was-failure.

[xxviii] Okrent, 211.

[xxix] Lerner. www.pbs.org/kenburns/prohibition/unintended-consequences/.

[xxx] Sandbrook, www.theguardian.com/film/2012/aug/26/lawless-prohibition-gangsters-speakeasies.

[xxxi] Moore. www.nytimes.com/1989/10/16/opinion/actually-prohibition-was-a-success.html.

[xxxii] Lerner. www.pbs.org/kenburns/prohibition/unintended-consequences/.

 

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